Bitch TV Episode 2

Ok, guys and gals, I'm back for another round of slaps and bruises, but I value all comers' opinions

You may recall a couple of months ago I came advertising Bitch TV and its episode 1 (completed in July)

I didn't get a single good comment from GFF. Further reflection made me realize exactly what went wrong.


So, the editor that made episode 1 has been replaced by...me! I made episode 2, and it is now available for download. It actually has a semblance of a story this time

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGGmuXF8Hm4

This is where you can view it! I hope you guys will give me some constructive criticism...you know, how to make it better.

Also, if you could tell me what worked out, it might help shape future episodes.

Finally, please try and stomach the whole episode if you don't like the beginning. I worked very hard and would like you to gain a modicum of enjoyment at least!

Thank you, everybody!

If you want to download it directly, you can go to the main Bitch TV site

Enjoy


FINALLY, PLEASE STATE WHETHER YOU LIKE OR DISLIKE THE EPISODE. Just say like or dislike

Jam it back in, in the dark.

Hey, everybody!

After receiving input from people that watched the episode, I revised it. Many chanegs were made from the original in an attempt to make it less boring. People generally believe I succeeded.

So, if you would please watch episode 2 revised and comment, I would be most appreciative!

Thanks!

There's nowhere I can't reach.

I found it incredibly boring. Yep, the whole thing. It just seems to be a bunch of guys bumming around in the woods, laughing inanely. Maybe a teenage mind would find this entertaining but I certainly didn't. Sorry. I want ten minutes of my life back .

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

I didn't see the first episode but if its worse that the second then i'm not interested.
I thought it was suppose to be an imitation of jackass at first but I found that it was nothing like jackass. It was just some guys going around and acting semi stupid and bored. This show didn't even have a premise. What is the whole purpose of sliding on wet grass and going into the woods. This would make a good home video so that you can watch years laters for a memory but not a show. Just becuase you had fun doing it doesn't mean that we'll have fun watching it.
oh and also about the name "bitch tv" at first I thought you guys were all going to be assholes somewhere but I realized you didn't do that. Then I though there would be girls going at it and playing tricks on people but I saw nothing of the sort. Its an all male cast so why name it bitch tv. Which was the last time you saw a dude call another dude "bitch"?
I saw nothing entertaining or funny. I also want my 9 minutes and 50 seconds back, and the 20 second that it took to buffer the videooke:

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?

Uhm. What. Er... Is it supposed to... Wait, what's going on--... Oh fuck it.

I want my five minutes back. I closed it halfway through. Boring and unfunny.

I was speaking idiomatically.

Thanks for commenting before watching it the whole way through. No, really. It was totally worth your time.

What kind of toxic man-thing is happening now?