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Good Points, Bad Points based on the Screenshots:
Bad: - Tacky/ugly Start Screen (Looks like a couple of shop filters at best. "LOL LENSEFLARE!" kind of stuff). - The Default font is ugly (why didn't you change it?) - Pixelated screenshots (Which may not be so in-game) - The picture of the ... town? Looks sparse and items seem to be randomly placed with little regard to function or purpose (Why is the house so tiny? and a Chocobo next to a cow?). - Images of the character in battle have the HP, MP, CT words ON the image, instead of next to it. - Several of the characters look like Sprite Versions of other RPG Characters. I see Abel from SO3, Noelle & the kid from Tales of Symphonia. Coincidence? Good: - Battle Sprites look customised - Level up screen has a "Valkyrie Profile" vibe to it. - Nice to see Visible Weapons on the battle sprites. Other: - "Threads of Destiny" might be too similar to Tales of Destiny or Threads of Fate, both Playstation RPGs. Maybe you should consider a change in title to avoid confusion and possible legal bullshit? Honestly I almost want to make my own game in RMXP just to show what a REAL RPG Maker made-game can be, but I don't want to discourage your efforts. The whole thing does look like you put a lot of effort into it (Voice Acting and Music I want to hear to see how that turns out). However, you need to hear construcive criticism, rather then just blind praise (Having people like your work is fine)... Only through that process of review and revision can your work improve (And genuinely deserve the praise it has been getting), no matter what kind of creative outlet you or someone else may be venturing in, as it can apply to writng, 3D Modeling, Web site design, filmography, music & vocal production, etc.,. Alternatively, my standards may be too high since I am in college FOR game design, and I pay attention to stuff like this. As for your site: Some of the screenshots on your site look better and show more of what you were trying to convey in asking people to 'check out your game'. You also might want to clean up and make your website a bit more professional if possible. I understand HTML can be tricky and not everyone is a web designer but your site CAN look better The story seems a bit cliched, but since its a demo I'll leave my story impressions for that.And please do not take these criticisms personally, this is to help you improve everything. I'll give a full review after I play through the demo. Jam it back in, in the dark.
Last edited by Dark Nation; Sep 20, 2006 at 02:17 AM.
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