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 Member 668 Level 20.50 Mar 2006 
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You just started rapping - I can tell. Just by reading your lyrics, they aren't bad, rhyme scheme is actually pretty good, but as a rapper, it ain't just about the rhyming. Your flow and delivery are just horrid, but it's something that's gonna come with time.
If you wanna be an emcee, just keep droppin'. Jam it back in, in the dark. |
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