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"A humanoid cyborg is being resurrected by the power of mystic working hand in hand together with the digital force thus bringing upon us the age of Digital Mystic."
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It's very awkward. The one thing that stands out the most is that "humanoid cyborg" is redundant. A cyborg is an enhanced human (think The Borg from Star Trek).
"Hand in hand together" is also redundant.
Lastly "is being resurrected" doesn't agree in verb tense. The following still sounds a bit odd (probably because I don't know what the hell is going on), but I believe is grammatically correct.
--A cyborg is resurrected by the power of mystic. Working together with the digital force the age of Digital Mystic is upon us.
Jam it back in, in the dark.
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