Grammar question

Originally Posted by Aardork

I don't think either version is correct, and, as Face said, you should just change the whole structure, because it's really quite clumsy. Personally, I might write something like this:

It's dark, twisted and eerily confusing, however not overly so, owing to the great screenplay, which is a joint effort of Christopher Nolan and his brother Jonathan.

Too many commas

It's dark, twisted and eerily confusing without being overdone, owing to the great screenplay by Christopher Nolan and his brother Jonathan.

Make your sentences flow.

Edit: beaten by Face

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The dark plot is complex yet lucid, thanks to superb writing by Christopher and Jonathan Nolan.

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It's intricate but comprehensible because the Nolans sure can write some good shit!

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It is dark and twisted. It also happens to be oddly confusing. Fortunately, the dark twists are not overly overwhelming, nor are they over-the-top or played out. This dark, twisted tone for the movie was established by two conjoined screenwriters. Their names are Christopher and Jonathan Nolan. By the way, they are also brothers.

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