I played it for about thirty minutes. It's interesting. I like the artwork (assuming most of it is new) and the use of music is good so far (although an original score would be even better, assuming it's competent).
The not-so-good? The voice acting (which reaches SO2 levels) and the battle system (which is slow, sluggish and really not all that fun. I found myself skipping all the battles in the first dungeon).
You'd do yourself a huge favor if you cut out the voices altogether and polished up some of the writing. Aside from my criticisms, it's an ambitious project and I commend you for your efforts.
Jam it back in, in the dark.