Sword gurl WIP progress

Halo, i drew this sketch a while ago and i decided to scan it and work on it gonna post some wip pics as i move along, feel free to crit it.

first the sketch:


then the first wip screen:


as you can see i changed a couple of stuff, which is to the beter i think. The face in the sketch was weird, the parts were too far away from eachother, so im working on that, the hands are also horrible so im gonna fix that next.
Crits is welcomed =)

no homo

Ok, here is something that I do not understand about some art works, your's being merely one example.

The woman's shirt: It appears to conform to her breasts quite nicely. However, the shirt seems to be unbuttoned and very loose. Is there some magical vacuum or cloth magnet that surrounds anime-style women's breasts which enables this strange phenomenon? Or is it the result of some strange silica-induced static cling? explnplzkthx.

There's nowhere I can't reach.

I'm not exactly sure who she reminds me of, but it's a good start. The second drawing seems to be coming along nicely. I like the hairstyle in the second picture.

I'm interested in seeing how you do the hands later on though.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

im not really sure myself but i was thinking of something like this:

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6...rlhands0id.jpg

If you have any ideas please let me know =)

Fjordor: Dont question the laws of fanservice

no homo

tried to do some more, but the heat is too much ;_; Trying couple of diffrent stuff with the legs, i think they are a bit too short...



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