Jessykins' Writing Thread...

Oh dear, it seems that a new story has been written.

Get it HERE or the opening post.

This story takes place after Lilael's last story, btw.

(Also, this is pretty much very violent. I was in a mood to write some gore. I promise I'll bring some REAL stories back eventually)

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Oooh.. new stuff. *clicks*

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?

I hope you see what I mean when I said there's a great scene at the end for you to DRAW FOR ME. WINK WINK.

I was speaking idiomatically.

I fixed all of my crappy, broken links in the main post and also remade this thread, thinking that all on old GFF was lost. Boy do I look stupid. Now there will be two of these on the first page, one of which is closed. I'm fucking awesome.

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Something new. Pretty short and lame, but it's been a while and I just needed to get back into it. Boneyard it's called. It's a Lilael thing. Get it on the front, or here.

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New short added. End of the Line. Can be found in the Other Blackfield Stories section, or right here

What, you don't want my bikini-clad body?

I really like your works Jessy.

Spoiler:

I remember reading the one where a woman was turned into a zombie or something. And another with a hooker being beaten at the end.

They both left an impression on me for sure. Keep on writing.

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Holy shit, I can't believe I missed that last one!

Also, sorry for not being able to draw hot lesbian Rue action. I'm kinda busy with work . I'll draw something for you (hopefully) soon.

There's nowhere I can't reach.

I just noticed your reply, Vemp. It's been THREE MONTHS.

Why must you tease me?

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Finally finished an new, actual story called Outsider.

Get it here or in the main post.

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I have a hard time doing street smart dialogue, but I enjoyed the piece rather well. Rakir isn't really a likeable guy in my eyes, so I enjoyed the picture painted of him. A bit longer than the previous work I've read of yours, and it holds together given your time away from doing something like this.

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Well, my first story in a good fucking while is finally done. It's a Lilael Snow story called Not Dead Yet, and you can find it in the first post or get the big file here. Or by chapters here: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7.

Please feed my back. I put a lot into this one.

What kind of toxic man-thing is happening now?

The continuation of black field saga with Lileal Snow. :3 You really like gang fictions. I am not a very big reader, so I have very limited point of reference. What I can say it was a not a hard read to "get into" so to speak. Unlike some author who make impenetrable pros seen to be design for confounding their readers.

Also, lol @ product placement. ;3

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Originally Posted by Magi

Also, lol @ product placement. ;3

Magi is smart, but does he know why killers enjoy Cinnamon Toast Crunch?

What, you don't want my bikini-clad body?

Let me first start off by saying I just finished your story, and secondly HORRAY! You finished your project!

Meanwhile, while I could appreciate how well-written and engrossing the detail to the surroundings and people were, I can't say I could relate too much to the story itself. This is a strictly personal standpoint of mine since you know, I didn't grow up in a city and the closest thing to a gang I've ever encountered was one man from the Hells Angels.

I'm not sure if you're looking for criticism for this or what here, so I'll just leave that one bit by itself for now. You really can write up a storm when you put your mind to it though, so please keep at it misseskins

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By all means, Abby. If you have some opinions or whatever about it, lemme hear 'em. Criticisms are accepted too.

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Ok, finally got around getting over here and all that.

Good job. I'm really impressed. I found nothing wrong with it.

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I am glad I was impressive! I hope I've made a fan of you, heh.

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I remember when I would read all your stories. I gotta start that again!
Right now, I have the first chapter of Not Dead Yet up on my screen. I'll post my thoughts when I finish all the chapters. Good to see a new story up! I kind of missed the last couple ones you did(and I'll probably read those in time, too)...

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After finishing the story, I must say that I'm impressed. It was really good. I'm glad I got around to doing it. I'm not much of a reader, but when I do read something that I like, I don't stop.

I would also like to add that sometimes when I do read, my mind tends to wander off and I get distracted. That didn't happen so much while I was reading this time.

I really liked all the attention to detail you gave. Nice. I'm reminded that reading can be enjoyable. =)

The only negative thing I can think of is actually quite small and might have more to do with my reading... A couple times when there is dialogue, I get confused about who is speaking. But like I said, maybe that's just my fault. haha.

Also,

Spoiler:

You killed off little Paulie! Just when I thought he was gonna get by okay. And geez! Valeska is savage! And since it's been a while since I read your other stories, Rue sounds terrifying."

Yay for story!

I was speaking idiomatically.

Thanks for the input, Nahual! I'm glad you liked it.

Next story will probably be a Rue focused one, so if you think she's terrifying NOW...

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Looking forward to it! =D

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I just had to transfer everything over to a new server today, so if anybody gets a bad link or a wrong upload let me know.

Who am I kidding? Nobody reads this.

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Lies.

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I just finished reading the first Rue story. I liked it a lot. I think i'm gonna be a regular in this thread. No homework and stuff makes for lots of spare time.

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That's good to hear. I'd like to think they actually get better as they go along (they happen to be listed in the order I wrote them anyway) so tell me what you think.

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