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 Member 946 Level 5.43 Mar 2006 
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You cuss a lot in your writing.
I don't know about anybody else, but it makes your work seem very unprofessional. I understand that cussing isn't directly correlative to intelligence. To cuss is simply ones own way of adequately expressing oneself. But your characters cuss so frequently that I can't help but feel like they're overly dramatizing the moment. But don't take me wrong. Your writing works, for the most part, and your characters, I'm sure, are very real in many aspects. I just feel like the frequent cursing is often times unnecessary. Jam it back in, in the dark. |
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