Roninon

This is a webcomic that I made and am working on.

There's only four comics in the archive, but I'm working on adding a comic every other day (or so.)

It's about a Ronin who has adopted the name Sin. It's going to be set in a fantasy universe, and he has a pretty complex story, but the comics haven't really delved into that yet.

The site is more or less still under development, so bare with us.

Also, my spelling and grammar is horrible, so there are a few errors in the comics, and several errors in the commentaries.

Stoob, on the other hand, has flawless spelling and grammar. (He edited this post for me)

Oh, and somewhere along the line we decided to adopt the goofiest psuedonymns we could think of. (I'm "The Gerbil King" and Stoob is "SenatorGNM")

So, anywhere, as far as critiquing, there's not much for content, so don't bother with that. Instead, focus on the artwork. And, please, check back regularly!

Edit: So I'm too much of a noob to post URLs. I'm gonna have Stoob post the actual URL for me, in this thread.

Jam it back in, in the dark.

Posting more than four panels every other day would be pretty tough, I have a job and school to worry about, and I am not currently making money off this (witness the Freewebs account)... I could change it to eight panels every week, but then you wouldnt get as much out of it. What do you think? Would doing one 8-12 panel comic really be better? Thanks for the criticism though.

And the "Now you R Gonna die" is an example of my horrible punctuation, it should be "Now you're gonna die!"

As for contributing in the future...I hope I can find my place here.

There's nowhere I can't reach.

Well I could do a page a week, it would look just like a comic, or manga page, all creative and such. But I could only do one a week... That would look better, thank you for the idea. The good thing is its not to late to change. Would that make it more appealing? Because I want to make it somthing people enjoy reading, not a small strip people read because they feel they need to.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

Thank you Magi for the advice, it really helped to see it first hand, and I have to be brutally honest to myself in the fact that, yours was more interesting. As for the story, the in depth plot can be found in the bios page, but the first four were sapposed to be typical, just to get a feel for it. Im sorry if thats a turn down.

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?