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Rakka's little photography thread
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PiccoloNamek
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Old Oct 14, 2006, 01:12 AM Local time: Oct 13, 2006, 11:12 PM #1 of 11
I will comment on the rest of the pictures later, but first I must comment on the picture of Blue's Brew's BBQ, because it is my favorite. It is the kind of picture I would take, especially with the blue clouds. This has so much potential to be a wonderfully moody image! The only things that bother me are the skewed perspective, and the color, or perhaps, the presense of color. I think the image would be far more captivating in black and white. Here is an example of a tritone I made in Photoshop. Feel free to try your hand at making your own:



A picture such as this would have greatly benefitted from the use of a view camera, where you could have used rear tilt to stop the lines from converging vertically. A tilt-shift lens can produce the same effect. Canon makes some TS lenses, but they're extremely expensive.

More comments coming soon...

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PiccoloNamek
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Old Oct 17, 2006, 10:00 PM Local time: Oct 17, 2006, 08:00 PM #2 of 11
More comments, as promised.

"Stonewall": I think perhaps shooting the wall from closer up and a more downward angle would have increased the perception of the length of the wall.

"Bolt": I think this is pretty neat, but you should have lessened the depth of field to pot more emphasis on the connector.

"Tower": I see what you were going for here, because I've taken shots like this, but something isn't right. Maybe it needs to be zoomed in a little more? Perhaps the trees should be made totally black as well.

"Jones": I like this one a lot. The DOF is just right and the mood is nice. Great shot!

"Puddle": I wouldn't have tilted the shot, but that's just me.

Rainbow: Oh, if you had only gotten the behind-view shot with the fabric in the frame, that would have rocked.

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