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galen
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Old Jan 24, 2007, 02:25 AM Local time: Jan 24, 2007, 12:25 AM #1 of 25
Good stuff. Your referenced work is really quite good, but it could stand to be a little more finished. (In the case of the Elisha Cuthbert portrait, since you didn't finish the face it makes me think you were focused...elsewhere.)

Your non-referenced "comic" style stuff suffers from some serious proportion issues though.

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Old Jan 24, 2007, 02:33 AM Local time: Jan 24, 2007, 12:33 AM #2 of 25
Traditionally superhero characters are at 8 or 9 heads, so they tower over average folks.

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Old Jan 24, 2007, 03:41 AM Local time: Jan 24, 2007, 01:41 AM #3 of 25
Uh, actually, two and three are terribly misproportioned.


Her head is more than just "slightly" elongated. It's much too large. Her hand is also too small. (edit: Upon second glance, it looks like the hand is just slightly too small, but since it's next to the head it makes it look tiny)


Again, her head is too big and the hand is too small. (although both are better in this one) Her arm is too short, and her waist is ridiculous.

Also, I would seriously reconsider your position on showing your references. Posting your references allows us to make more accurate suggestions as to what you can improve. For example - the Elisha Cuthbert portrait. The head is proportionally spot-on to the photograph, but the body is too small. I noticed this only after looking at your image and the photograph side by side.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

Last edited by galen; Jan 24, 2007 at 03:57 AM.
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