GFF Literary Workshop: Trial Week 1

Wow. It's a lot shorter than I remember. I distinctly remember being over the amount of words required. Huh.

Jam it back in, in the dark.

Thank you all for your comments. I'll take them into consideration for when I decide to expand/edit this story.

There's nowhere I can't reach.

Originally Posted by orion_mk3

The second trial week will go up tomorrow morning, so if anyone has any comments, or if Acro-nym would like to add anything in response to the comments already made, now's the time!

I guess I'll just say that when I originally wrote the story, there was a word limit or a page limit or something that forced me to rush certain parts of the story. And that's been noted and suggestions have been offered on what to do to expand on those sections.

It was also during a time when I wasn't as comfortable with dialogue as I am now, though I'm still not fully comfortable. There have been some suggestions regarding including more, but I don't find that to be a pressing concern. That's not to say I won't try to include more, but I don't want to force it in for the sake of it being there.

Only one person said anything about the ending being open. That ending is intentional. You aren't supposed to know what happened to Howard or where he goes from there. Maybe there are elements within that, though, that could be made more clear.

I thank you all again for commenting. You've been helpful.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.