GFF Literary Workshop: Week 8

I'm basically posting this so i can say that i've been reading the submissions, but lately i've been a little listless with my appreciation and cirticism of them.

I really liked the description you used in this peice. I found it to be effective, and well executed. Unfortunately i was kind of distracted while reading it, so i can really only say this about the first third of the peice. From what i retained in that dusty old brain of mine i really liked the story.

I think another one of the reasons i didn't really have alot to say on it was that it's not finished, and so a final opinion can't really be gleaned at this point, at least that's how i feel.

Hope that helps.

Jam it back in, in the dark.