Fookin' Prawns!

Member 56

Level 24.48

Mar 2006

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Oct 28, 2006, 05:01 PM
Local time: Oct 28, 2006, 10:01 PM
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The initial sentence, though very poorly put together doesn't break any rules. At least, that extra "a" would not count as a mistake. Removing it makes the sentence sound wrong. Hm, let's have a go at this thing.
"Though dark and complex, the plot is not overly convoluted, thanks in no small part to the superior writing talents of Christopher and Jonathan Nolan."
Jam it back in, in the dark.
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