Please Critique my Commission

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Hi Gamingforce friends,

Please critique my commission that I did for a friend. I know the for BeetleGirl is kind of too large, and her thighs are big, but I would like to know to see a statistic of what is good and what is bad. I know some people like it, and some people don't.

Thanks for your help,

Bentoboxbobby ^^

The font you use is a pain to read.

You are actually getting paid for this? Not bad. Although there are some major issue with this piece. I am not sure what you are trying to communicate. The thing that jump out to me, is that the character seen to be falling over, even the guy standing in the back. So why are you having her bending to the right like that?

Second issue I have with the girl is that she doesn't seen to have much of a torso. Her mid section should be a little longer. Unlike the guy in the back, she is not grounded, that makes her pose a little less convincing.


Jam it back in, in the dark.