Ultima's Artstuff and Assorted Creations

This is one of the few time that I actually see your colored piece, but why Oekaki? The newest one is shaping up to be pretty good looking. :3 Although how you are coloring are fairly conservative (as in being careful, as oppose to "bold"), although I guess its hard to take chances with Oekakis. Unfortunately, I don't think there are some of the direct bitmap line tool in some of the advence graphic software as do in Oekaki.

Jam it back in, in the dark.

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Its kinda weird not seeing the line going into her groin area but come out on the stomach. Did I gave the right advice last time? I think since you eliminated the line that is use to describe the topography of her crotch area, it probably redundant to put it near her stomach. Although overall, I think it looks pretty good. :3 I like your hands too, even though it is kinda big, those are really good girl hands. >_< Which I seem to have trouble with.

There's nowhere I can't reach.

Looking good, keep it up. :3 Are you using photoshop? Did you seperate it into layers? Have you decided on the light source yet? How are you planning on shading it?

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

Hm, interesting. I see you are doing some different poses (second sketch on the top in particular), that is good. Experiment with the body build up a little. Although I am wondering, do you have the hobbit of finding reference for poses that you are unsure of? It really helps sometimes, and when you are comfortable with certain angle with some practice, you won't need to find reference for specific poses anymore.

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"I want to graduate."

Is that drawn from life? Moer!

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?

Hey, that looks pretty good. :3 Nice perspective for something like that. So how are you going about to CG it?

I was speaking idiomatically.

Well, I think you could use a little more mechanical details and textures on some of the parts. The gears and the cog in the back for example, you can probably elaborate it a little as you go. Adding to the visual complexity of the entire image.

What kind of toxic man-thing is happening now?

This is taking a awfully long time. Do you think it might be easier to use polygon tool to fill it in? If you don't use the fill tool as a principle...

FELIPE NO

Originally Posted by Ultima

All just excuses, the real answer is I just suck.

Rather, I think you are being indecisive about what exactly that you want to do, and also being a little bit too careful about the whole thing.

What, you don't want my bikini-clad body?