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So... which ones are new? You might want to differentiate those, and also highlight them in the front with the completed pieces that you are most proud off. Otherwise we enjoy your art for the most part.

What happend to your comics? It looks really good so far (when you were posting it on the journal).

How ya doing, buddy?

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Magus on a segway

I enjoy that very much.

Are you looking for specific crtiques? What are you working on at the moment?

There's nowhere I can't reach.

Serena VanHouten looks nice. It certainly looks polished. Although the body doesn't seem to twist naturally. I couldn't quite tell if her upper body is actually leaning foward or laying back (even though it looks more like laying back). I wish I could find a good reference for this.

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Hey, this looks really nice. He is wearing his pants very high though. Choose a higher grade color for shading on the boot instead of white please.

How ya doing, buddy?

I really like the one with the aristocratic guy hanging upside down, the background especially, looks fantastic. :3

How ya doing, buddy?

I like it. Even though there are some issue as to the planer consistencies in terms of figure's perspective in relation to their background, but I think you handle the lighting condition, especially how the fire is lighting the figure very well.

What kind of toxic man-thing is happening now?

Not bad, not bad at all. I'd like to see her eyes a bit closer together, but its not a big problem. I would have preferred fleshier skin tone, but it is preference issue. ;} I wonder if you can give her a little bit more rib. Thee really isn’t much to complaint about I guess, for all intends a purpose, it’s a nice piece and it is easy on the eyes, some people might have problem with bright saturated colors but not me.

Oh, you might want to check the shadow on her right leg.

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Sorry, I can't really find out what's wrong/correct in an anime drawing because anime is all about 'distorting' or 'exxagerating'.

No, some rules still applies. I don't like this line of reasoning.

Edit: One more thing, you might have left out some of the cast shadows. Remember, besides regular shading, objects also cast shadows onto itself. Even though it isn't something big, it is some of the things that can change our perception of the placement of an object on a character.



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