Oh, Nall...
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Apr 2006
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Oct 5, 2006, 04:30 AM
Local time: Oct 5, 2006, 03:30 AM
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Hahah! Watashi Ano Kori Ni Modoritai is my favorite.
Yeah. I really like poems where the writer is having fun with it, and it's conveyed in the poem. Silence does that, too, I think. I think you have a knack for it, but the best practice is to keep doing them and realizing how shitty old stuff is in comparison. Some of my poems from like 2 years ago are so freaking arbitrary and subjective that the only reason I remember what they're about is because I have a personal attachment to them. Obviously, you'll want to try to avoid arbitrary subjective rantings... without letting the reader in on why stuff is happening.
Do have fun with words and cleverings!
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