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 Member 4186 Level 13.65 Mar 2006 
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Grammar question
I'm currently writing on a review for the movie The Prestige but I don't know which variation of the following sentence is grammatically correct.
It’s dark and twisted but not too dark and weirdly confusing thanks to the great screenwriting by a collaboration between Christopher and his brother Jonathan Nolan. It’s dark and twisted but not too dark and weirdly confusing thanks to the great screenwriting by collaboration between Christopher and his brother Jonathan Nolan. It's basically only the a in a collaboration which bothers me. thanks Jam it back in, in the dark.  |
Member 4186 Level 13.65 Mar 2006
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Thanks ya'll!
I normally reconstruct the whole sentence when I'm not sure but I didn't know that this one was so wrong. There's nowhere I can't reach. |
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