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 Member 34 Level 23.53 Mar 2006 
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Critique on Serena VanHouten portrait:
1. The ankles (especially on the left leg where it looks fractured) look weird and distended, and the feet add to that effect. 2. Very good attention to detail (the big butt looks just like a big butt should look; shoulders, hands and face look well-done; proportions excluding the feet/ankle regions are great). 3. The nose looks like it's a flesh colored rectangle jutting out from her face. You probably want to fix that. 4. You did a good job with the boobers <__< 5. Maybe make the clavicle line (or whatever you call that line extending from the top of the shoulder to the upper chest) a bit shorter as it looks somewhat unnatural. A good job overall, though. Do you do requests? Jam it back in, in the dark.
Last edited by Moon; Mar 30, 2006 at 09:55 PM.
Reason: f-ing spelling .__.
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Member 34 Level 23.53 Mar 2006
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Yeah, the collarbone line (thought that was it but wasn't sure). I'll be sure to drop an /r/ or two in this thread when you do get some definate time, as you appear to have some good talent (especially shows through on the Schala Zeal and Steal Masters pics).
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