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An Untitled Poem
I’m losing sleep in my waking dream,
Haunted by a reflection of you, It hurts me to remember, This painful thing, I don’t want to say it- Want never to remember it- Want naught to do with it. But there, it’s still there, Whispering at me, Keeping me awake, I want naught to do with it. I’ll wait for now, Sleepless, Restless, Thin as paper, Waiting to recover, Please don’t make me say it. Wrote it in about 5 minutes, curious as to what you guys think. Jam it back in, in the dark. |
Thanks Deni and Ozma! As I said, I wrote it in 5 minutes, not giving much thought. Just wrote down the feelings and whatever came to mind at the time. Wanted a little constructive criticism from outside before I went back to it. Again, thanks
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