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 Member 26829 Level 1.73 Dec 2007 
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Please Critique my Commission
Hi Gamingforce friends,
Please critique my commission that I did for a friend. I know the for BeetleGirl is kind of too large, and her thighs are big, but I would like to know to see a statistic of what is good and what is bad. I know some people like it, and some people don't. Thanks for your help, Bentoboxbobby ^^ Jam it back in, in the dark. |
Member 26829 Level 1.73 Dec 2007
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RE: Magi's Quote
Hi Magi, Thanks a lot for your great insight. I just like it when people critique honestly because it forces me to be a better artist. The technical detail that you have inputted for me is marvelous, so I will copy what you had taught me what to do. The beetle girl is actually levitating, I'm sorry about it being confusing. It was actually two drawings I did that were recycled. The Beetle Girl I had drawn at least 10 years ago, and dug up. Then I superimposed the Corvette Guy with a drawing I did this year for a contest, but was never used. Yeah, I know, the torso is whack, but its a great feeling to know my weaknesses because I like honesty. Well, if you have any more suggestions, I'm welcome to them. Otherwise, I'm back to the drawing board. Oh yeah, everyone tells me that I have to go back to school (like a community college) to do some figure drawing, and that is really true. Since I was a student a long time ago at San Jose State, we did life drawing a lot. I really miss that. By the way, I have a youtube account, and it's bentoboxbobbytv. I'm making this a reference site for every artist to get ideas. One day, I will use this in an art school like a curator. Well, hope to keep in touch with you again.  Sincerely, Bobby [/FONT] There's nowhere I can't reach.
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Last edited by bentoboxbobby; Dec 24, 2007 at 12:44 PM.
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