Jessykins' Writing Thread...

Uh..hi. So, I'm up real late reading Just Another Job, and I think you're awesome. Anything that I can actually get finished reading is awesome. and there aren't a lot of stuff that I finish reading. I'm a musician(shh. )
I really like how it was written.

I really enjoyed Just Another Job, and I have a feeling that I'll enjoy The Feeling is Mutual as well.
I think it's the opener, "I think about the dumbest shit during sex."
It's like, "whoa."

I wish I could write better...maybe it's time to go to college.
later!.

Jam it back in, in the dark.

Originally Posted by Jessykins &lt

I didn't even graduate high school, in fact. Only so much can be taught. If you want to be a good writer, just write. Write and read a LOT.

Also, I'm glad you liked my stories. Please read more and tell me what you think.

I plan on reading more. Not sure about writing though. Except for my songs. heh heh.
And of course I'll tell you what I think.

Double Post:
Oh my gosh. I just finished reading The Act of Losing Hope. That was some good stuff! I agree with whinehurst. You write so much better in the third person.

When I first clicked on the link for the story and saw that it was about 5 pages, I thought, "oh boy." but as I read, I couldn't stop and some things just made me read more and more.

I plan on reading everything you have posted up here, except for the very first one on your list. I think it says something like you probably won't finish with that storyline. Something like that.

Later!.

How ya doing, buddy?

Originally Posted by Jessykins &lt

You actually SHOULD read that, as it establishes Rue and Eddie as characters. It's something of a starter story I guess. The thing is, it's a stand alone story, but there was supposed to be a second part (with a different name) that I don't plan to do.

I was actually going to ask if that first story introduces the characters today.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

Hey!.
I just wanted to say thanks for letting me know that I should read the other stories. I read part one and started part two, and it's really interesting.
I'll say more when I finish reading everything you wrote. heh heh. I think I might be almost halfway there.

bye for now.

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?

Hey, dude. I just wanted to let you know that I read your newest story, Misanthrope, and to let you know I'll read any other ones you put up. I've been meaning to read it, but never was in the mood to read. You know?

And, well...I can't say much other than I liked it(like all your other writings) because I'm never good with criticism and I was never good with looking at stories, or anything else and analyzing(maybe because I look at things at a whole).

Great job. Thanks for sharing.
Later!.

I was speaking idiomatically.

Can't wait for your new story.

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I remember when I would read all your stories. I gotta start that again!
Right now, I have the first chapter of Not Dead Yet up on my screen. I'll post my thoughts when I finish all the chapters. Good to see a new story up! I kind of missed the last couple ones you did(and I'll probably read those in time, too)...

Additional Spam:
After finishing the story, I must say that I'm impressed. It was really good. I'm glad I got around to doing it. I'm not much of a reader, but when I do read something that I like, I don't stop.

I would also like to add that sometimes when I do read, my mind tends to wander off and I get distracted. That didn't happen so much while I was reading this time.

I really liked all the attention to detail you gave. Nice. I'm reminded that reading can be enjoyable. =)

The only negative thing I can think of is actually quite small and might have more to do with my reading... A couple times when there is dialogue, I get confused about who is speaking. But like I said, maybe that's just my fault. haha.

Also,

Spoiler:

You killed off little Paulie! Just when I thought he was gonna get by okay. And geez! Valeska is savage! And since it's been a while since I read your other stories, Rue sounds terrifying."

Yay for story!

FELIPE NO

Looking forward to it! =D

What, you don't want my bikini-clad body?