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el jacko takes pictures every now and then
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Old Jul 14, 2006, 02:47 PM Local time: Jul 14, 2006, 12:47 PM #1 of 15
If you find something that interests you, then it'd be wise to bracket your shots. Take like 10 shots or more of the same thing with slightly different angles and perspectives that way you'll have more variety. More shots = more choices = better photos.

With that being said, I like the photo with the chair and the graffiti. There's a lot of subtle texture in it and I'm a fan of texture. I don't know what it is but I feel that with a different composition the photo would be stronger. Which is why it would be beneficial to you to bracket, if you aren’t doing so already.

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Old Jul 14, 2006, 05:38 PM Local time: Jul 14, 2006, 03:38 PM #2 of 15
And that's fine of course, so long as you like it.

But I mean, consider that the shots that you really feel strongly about usually won't evoke the same emotion from other people. Similarly, the shots you probably like the least may ignite an overwhelming sense of passion in someone else. Just a matter of perception and the level of life experience one brings to the table.

Don't misunderstand, I do like the picture as is. Just wondering if another angle would be more effective.

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Old Oct 11, 2006, 06:28 PM Local time: Oct 11, 2006, 04:28 PM #3 of 15
I think the clock maybe a tad over exposed which is weird cause while there is very little detail in the clock, there's simultaneously very little detail in the background. I'm assuming that was sky? Maybe you could stop down a few and prolong the shutter speed, although, with lighting conditions like that, you'd need a tripod or something equivalent.

I like the textures in the third one and the repetition of the windows. However, that object in the bottom right foreground is really distracting. Also, composition-wise, I don't think it's very strong. I do like the blue, yellow, and white doors though. If you could have somehow cropped it in such a way as to bring attention to those primary colors I think it would be a bit stronger. Another thing about this photo is that the sky is really white. It's a bit distracting because white is such a strong color that it draws the eye to all this empty space. You could take a meter reading and stop down maybe two f/stops to get some detail in the highlights.

A similar issue in the fourth photo is the light source in the background. It draws too much attention away from your subject.

And the last photo, it's a really enticing piece but it's pretty dim. You could take a meter reading and opened up the aperture one or two stops to get some light in there.

Over all you have a good eye in terms of subject material, but be mindful of your negative space.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

Last edited by Kazyl; Oct 11, 2006 at 06:30 PM.
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