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 Member 16658 Level 28.10 Dec 2006 
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I'm helping my little sister with this same problem. It's bad with her... this is a girl who, as a sophomore in high school, spelled the word 'nap' as 'nape', asking for help from a picky English major. Editing for her has been HELL.
Anyways, be creative. Don't just stick to 'I did this in high school, and this... and this...' Grab the reader's attention by starting with a story. Don't limit yourself to academic and work related things. Jam it back in, in the dark.  |
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