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 Member 10 Level 40.03 Feb 2006 
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I don't think either version is correct, and, as Face said, you should just change the whole structure, because it's really quite clumsy. Personally, I might write something like this:
It's dark, twisted and eerily confusing, however not overly so, owing to the great screenplay, which is a joint effort of Christopher Nolan and his brother Jonathan. Jam it back in, in the dark. Nothing wrong with not being strong
Nothing says we need to beat what's wrong Nothing manmade remains made long That's a debt we can't back out of |
Member 10 Level 40.03 Feb 2006
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The crepuscular yet luminous plot rocks my world to its very foundation; mad props to the dynamic Nolan duo, Chris and Jonny.
There's nowhere I can't reach. Nothing wrong with not being strong
Nothing says we need to beat what's wrong Nothing manmade remains made long That's a debt we can't back out of |
Aardark