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 Member 1928 Level 33.66 Mar 2006 
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Let me first start off by saying I just finished your story, and secondly HORRAY! You finished your project!
Meanwhile, while I could appreciate how well-written and engrossing the detail to the surroundings and people were, I can't say I could relate too much to the story itself. This is a strictly personal standpoint of mine since you know, I didn't grow up in a city and the closest thing to a gang I've ever encountered was one man from the Hells Angels. I'm not sure if you're looking for criticism for this or what here, so I'll just leave that one bit by itself for now. You really can write up a storm when you put your mind to it though, so please keep at it misseskins Jam it back in, in the dark. 
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