HAY GUYS

CryHavoc · Local time: Jun 26, 2006, 11:32 AM

Hi guys, here i'll be posting my old sketches for criticism, positive or negative, feel completely free to say anything in relation to the drawings, i will not take them in a wrong way because i'm looking to improve and phase out my flaws if possible.

Also if you suggest things like "I think the mouth is misplaced" or "head is too small/big" i might redo/make a new sketch with the improvement you suggest so we'd see how it helped, so please don't hesitate to suggest/nitpick-on anything.

Here we go :

Sketch of Ky-Kiske :

Sketch of Sol-Badguy (Gunflaming) :

Sketch of Iori Yagami - Done with a pen (yeah i know shoulders are too big =P, that's intentional ):

Sketch of Eddie (Zato-1):

Original (well not so original) character #1:

Original (well not so original) character #2:

Original (well not so original) character #3 (done in pen):

Original (well not so original) character #4:

Will update if you don't hate it !

Jam it back in, in the dark.

Magi · Local time: Jun 27, 2006, 12:34 PM

Hey, welcome back to TCC (?). Although I wish you would post something new. Why not post something that you are working on?

There's nowhere I can't reach.

guyinrubbersuit · Local time: Jun 27, 2006, 01:34 PM

I like the guy in the red. I really have nothing in the way of criticisms.

This thing is sticky, and I don't like it. I don't appreciate it.

CryHavoc · Local time: Jun 28, 2006, 03:19 AM

Originally Posted by Magi

Hey, welcome back to TCC (?). Although I wish you would post something new. Why not post something that you are working on?

Welcome back?

also, yeah sure why not, you're right i will scan in the stuff i do these days, i really do like 10 of them in a sitting so they ain't dear to me that i'd scan all of 'em, those were when i applied to draw a local comic internal cover (yes i got it, too, i just did the pencils though, yeah why don't i scan that in, too =D )

Will post more, but where did you see any of my stuff before?

I am a dolphin, do you want me on your body?

Meth · Local time: Jun 29, 2006, 06:41 PM

Those are pretty good. Do you have anything that's finished and polished? What you've shown is awesome, but they're very thumbnail in quality. Even in quicker sketches, you should try to have solid lines instead of making them so feathery.

keep up the awesomeness.

How ya doing, buddy?

CryHavoc · Local time: Jun 30, 2006, 07:47 AM

Thanks man, sadly no i have nothing too polished since i suck at inking and coloring, well not totally suck but it's never on par with the pencils..

Feathery lines kick ass!! What are you talking about?!

Heheh. will attempt coloring one of the new ones. or at least inking it.

What kind of toxic man-thing is happening now?