A quick music I made
 

Hey everyone, I need to make a videogame music for next month (nothing crazy at all). I was thinking about an Ocean music, the kind fo music you'd hear when exploring under the ocean. I made something quick that lasts around 1 minute. It's not clean at all, no effects etc. but you can hear the kind of melody and tone I'd like to go for.
A Whole Ocean to Explore

Sorry about the rapidshare. :P I'd basically just like to know if the melody is pleasant, if it fits the Under the Ocean theme. A "good" or "bad" comment is enough too. ;)

PS: I'm just starting btw with music composition, it's more of a hobby.

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I made some progress I think, it lasts more than 3 minutes now. Here's a direct link so you can listen instantly.
Inside Your Dreams

Is it good? Or does it suck complete ass? :O

I kinda liked it...although I'm not sure it's really ocean theme material.

I think your second title "Inside your dreams" is more what it sounds like, especially with the synthesized sound pad you used. Definitely a good start! Keep 'em coming!

Haha yeah I changed the title since I didn't think it fit the ocean theme I was going for at first. Thanks a lot for the reply, it motivates me to continue. :P

Alright I'm currently making another tune, and I thought it kind of sounded like an old-school zelda dungeon theme at the beginning. :P It's about half the song right now.
Stuck in a Dungeon v0.3 ----

Any suggestions to make it better? I'm really just a newbie still at making music, but I've been playing around with the program quite a lot and it's addictive!