Seris' partially NSFW art explosion of gay! (version 3.0)
 

EDIT (December 13th, 2006):

All links to my art have been removed, due to me having moved my website to a new server. Until I have the time and patience to re-link all the pieces I've draw and had previously linked in this thread, please visit the following for all your art viewing needs:


SKETCHES-fanart & original
FINISHED ORIGINAL PIECES
FINISHED FANART PIECES
OEKAKI

COMICS

Sorry for the broken links ;_;

So... which ones are new? You might want to differentiate those, and also highlight them in the front with the completed pieces that you are most proud off. Otherwise we enjoy your art for the most part.

What happend to your comics? It looks really good so far (when you were posting it on the journal).

Oh, new pieces are placed last on the list--you know, in decending order. Some of these aren't brand new, which is why they're not highlighted. Once I get some things done that are essentially fresh off the press, I'll put them up accordingly.

But highlighting my prouder pieces isn't a bad idea. I might just go back and do that~


And my comics have been out of production for the past few months. I may or may not pick it back up again. Who knows.

Anyways, thanks for your suggestions and comment!

Hey Seris, don't forget about the one Im using in my sig. That one just rocks :)

Haha, Magus on a segway lol. Nice art Seris!

Thank you, thank you very much~

I am now debating whether or not I should put up my hentai pieces or not, at the risk of crossing the "no porn on GFF" line >>

Hate double posting, but, new piece is up in the fanart section if anybody fucking cares >=|

I enjoy that very much.

Are you looking for specific crtiques? What are you working on at the moment?

I looked at all of the starred ones. That's some nice art! Also, Magus X Robo is HOT.

Not really. I mean, I don't post stuff and tell people that they need to critique me or anything; it's just that, it'd be nice to get some feedback instead of having this thread be pushed down into the depths of hell here. It's kind of frustrating.

Also, currently I'm not working on anything. I had been working on that dochuki piece that I just put up, but obviously it's done now so nothing can really be changed at this point.

It's all TERRIBLE because NO PIRATES >=( depressed lemming is still cool

New piece is up in the fanart section. Now am going to leave because talking not good at this hour thing my eyes keee

Everyone knows your best Magus drawing is q.gif, why lie >=0

Actually it's this because it looks most like q.gif >=|~

Hop on your segway, segway GOOO

Nonsense, ZUBAAAAAAAAAN bus > segway >=|~~~

New piece is up in the finished section! Please check it out if you have a moment~

Critique on Serena VanHouten portrait:
1. The ankles (especially on the left leg where it looks fractured) look weird and distended, and the feet add to that effect.
2. Very good attention to detail (the big butt looks just like a big butt should look; shoulders, hands and face look well-done; proportions excluding the feet/ankle regions are great).
3. The nose looks like it's a flesh colored rectangle jutting out from her face. You probably want to fix that.
4. You did a good job with the boobers <__<
5. Maybe make the clavicle line (or whatever you call that line extending from the top of the shoulder to the upper chest) a bit shorter as it looks somewhat unnatural.

A good job overall, though.

Do you do requests?

Thank you for your crits, moon, though it's a little late to make any changes now ;_; Well, maybe. I still have the psp file on my computer, but I'd prefer NOT to draw this piece again as I've already got like a jillion hardcopies inked.

Anyway, the er, clavicle line? Do you mean the collarbone? << If that's what you're talking about, I agree. It is a little too long for what it is. I'm still trying to get the hang of bettering my anatomy.

Meanwhile, I guess I COULD do some requests. However, I have a few other drawing projects I want to do before I start doing open pieces. When I have some clear, definite time though, I will post a notice in this thread ASAP ^^

Yeah, the collarbone line (thought that was it but wasn't sure). I'll be sure to drop an /r/ or two in this thread when you do get some definate time, as you appear to have some good talent (especially shows through on the Schala Zeal and Steal Masters pics).

Serena VanHouten looks nice. It certainly looks polished. Although the body doesn't seem to twist naturally. I couldn't quite tell if her upper body is actually leaning foward or laying back (even though it looks more like laying back). I wish I could find a good reference for this.

Revival of a dead thread, just so I can post up my some-what latest piece of art:

http://www.dlumber.frogdrop.com/thin...shed/yusai.jpg

Hey, this looks really nice. He is wearing his pants very high though. Choose a higher grade color for shading on the boot instead of white please.

Just wanted to stop by. I love your art work.

It looks better in real life though ;_;

http://www.dlumber.frogdrop.com/thin...ed/lionman.png
Ooo, I really like this one, I just find something odd about the right foot.

What program did you use to make that in? Anywho, really neato :D.

That is really cool, Seris. You seem to do a lot better (or at least, make more interesting pieces) when you step out of your "comfort zone." You should do it more often.

I just looked at more of your stuff. I like the Ganon/Tangle slash. The contrasting body sizes and overall level of detail combined with my heightened sense of perversion really do it for me.

I also liked the Ozzie porn.

Yet another thread revival. >>

You may [or may not?] know that the frogdrop folder you've linked to is empty... and none of the art is actually there. So I'm wondering if it'll all be posted on the new website when it's all said and done? Mainly cause I've only seen a few drawings, but they were FREAKING AWESOME and I'd love to see more. :D

Yeah, none of the links worked for me ;___; I'd like to see your art, because everyone I've seen so far thinks you're awesome.

A 404 is fine, too.

Uh--!

Oh, er, uh, wow. Old thread revival is OLD.

Yeah, so er, my new site is Depressed Lumberjacks, and it's still under construction. I'll be uploading my art in small incriments as the site comes along, and once that happens I'll link to my pieces again.

Meanwhile, er, if you want to see my art just check out my chocojournal or something. As more junk comes along it's apt to be posted there.


Sorry guys!

I really like the one with the aristocratic guy hanging upside down, the background especially, looks fantastic. :3

Oh, so Q's e-girlfriend does gay porn eh? Interesting.

Actually, I checked the Chocojournal, and... Only the upside-down guy, and the Tingle-pr0n pics showed up. I noticed a few other places where there SHOULD be pictures [aka: view page source] but the links for those are dead too. :/

But thanks! At least we'll be able to see when the new site is ready. :D

If anybody still cares, here's a link to a journal entry with all of my up-and-running art directories in it.

I'll also go back and edit some of these posts and get some pictures that were supposed to be up and running... Up and running <<

And thanks, Magi. Glad you approve~

you have alot of work there. I especially like the hungry snake. Good work

Just posting in this thread to let everyone know that not everything I draw is gay porn.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c3...workinprog.jpg

Whether or not it is actually decent artwork, only time will tell as work is done on it.

Hey Seris, join us here: http://www.gamingforce.com/forums/cr...l-artists.html

(or did you join already?)

oh btw, nice inkwork on that one, what did you use?

I did not join already. I'll have to once I get some other vital drawing projects out of the way.

Meanwhile, for the above piece, I just used one of those Bristol ink pens. Nothing too extravagant; it's what I use to ink all my pieces, when/if I ink them <<

none of the links seem to be working, lady.

I want some of that. I simply love the inkwork. I can't do inks that smooth. :(

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*EDITS FIRST POST =||||*

Not to be mean or anything.. but it looks like she got boobs on her back, even though it's problaby supposed to be those-whatchama-call-them things which are attached to the arms and shoulders o_o... shoulderplates?


Well, they look like they stick out a tad too much, thus making them look like spiffy boobs

Yeah, I see what you mean. Her shirt could be hugging her back a little bit more than it is there.

I'll have to fix that when I'm coloring it~

Just double posting to show you guys a very recently finished piece: this.

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I like it. Even though there are some issue as to the planer consistencies in terms of figure's perspective in relation to their background, but I think you handle the lighting condition, especially how the fire is lighting the figure very well.

Latest piece, just drawn last night and colored today:

http://www.depressedlumberjacks.com/...serenapose.jpg

Aside from the obvious spelling errors in the description, I'm curious as to what other faults I've made with this piece.

So please, critique away ;_;

Hm, I'm not that good with lighting, but I think the skirt/cape thing looks parallel to the screen than to her ass/back/body (I think because of the shadows). Overall it's ok. (body proportions, etc..)

Sorry, I can't really find out what's wrong/correct in an anime drawing because anime is all about 'distorting' or 'exxagerating'.

Not bad, not bad at all. I'd like to see her eyes a bit closer together, but its not a big problem. I would have preferred fleshier skin tone, but it is preference issue. ;} I wonder if you can give her a little bit more rib. Thee really isn’t much to complaint about I guess, for all intends a purpose, it’s a nice piece and it is easy on the eyes, some people might have problem with bright saturated colors but not me.

Oh, you might want to check the shadow on her right leg.

No, some rules still applies. I don't like this line of reasoning.

Edit: One more thing, you might have left out some of the cast shadows. Remember, besides regular shading, objects also cast shadows onto itself. Even though it isn't something big, it is some of the things that can change our perception of the placement of an object on a character.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g2...st_shadows.jpg

Sorry, I didn't mean it in a bad way.

Oh my, that helps me so much =o You're a miracle when it comes to coloring and lighting, magi.

Additional Spam:
Double posting to show you the cheap edit with magi's advice in tow:

http://www.depressedlumberjacks.com/...renaedited.jpg

I would've done more with the editted version (as in, completely re-colored it) IF I hadn't been retarded and saved the image in its original layered version as the one flattened image it is now.

My next picture will have this advice in mind though. NEXT TIME.